domingo, 13 de septiembre de 2009

DESCRIBE THE PAINTING

Choose one of the pictures and make a description.Use there is/ are, colours, prepositions of place, present continuous etc.

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  1. HELLO LOLA:
    I´M GOING TO DESCRIBE THE PICASSO´S PICTURE.
    THIS IS A PICASSOS SLIDE, BECARFUL NO IS A PICTURE, YOU CANN´T TOUCH THEM.
    THE TITLE IS: "TWO WOMEN ARE RUNNING ON THE BEACH", PICASSO HAD PAINTED THIS PICTURE IN 1922.
    SLIDE DEFINITION IS BAD, YOU CAN´T SEE VERY WELL THEM. I FOUND ANOTHER ONE.
    WE CAN SEE TWO WOMEN ON THE LEFT AND ON THE CENTER IN THE COMPOSITION. THEY ARE RUNNING TO THE RIGHT, AND THEY SEEM HAPPY. THEIR HANDS ARE METTING, ARMS ARE OPENING AND THEIR BODIES ARE FEELING THE BREEZE. THEIR HAIRS AND DRESSES ARE FLYING WHILE THEIR CHESTS ARE GOING OUT LIKE BIRDS.
    WOMEN BODIES WAS PAINTED IN A SCULTURE WAY.THEY ARE VERY SOLID AND THE WAY WHICH PICASSO HAD PAINTED THEM, WAS LIKE A DRAW, BECAUSE LINES HAD BUILT THE FORM.
    MAC ARTHUR WROTE.
    SEE YOU NEXT DAY.

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  2. Thank you for your comments. It is always nice to learn from an expert. Anyway, there are some mistakes.Try to correct them:
    THE PICASSO´S PICTURE (grammar)
    A PICASSOS SLIDE (grammar)
    BECARFUL NO IS A PICTURE (grammar and spelling)
    CANN´T TOUCH THEM (grammar)
    ON THE CENTER IN THE COMPOSITION (wrong words and prepositions)
    THEIR HANDS ARE METTING (vocabulary)
    THEIR HAIRS (grammar)
    THEIR CHESTS ARE GOING OUT LIKE BIRDS.(vocabulary)
    WOMEN BODIES WAS PAINTED (grammar)
    THE WAY WHICH PICASSO HAD PAINTED THEM, WAS LIKE A DRAW (grammar)

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